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Query Letter Draft
Please consider reviewing for publication my first novel A Stabbing for Sadie, a horrific tale of a disturbed woman who commits a violent murder. It is an intense, disturbing story of a tormented child who grows into an unbalanced and eventually murderous woman, intent on destroying the "monster" which plagued her childhood.
The story itself begins with Sadie, waking up on the floor of her childhood home, covered in blood. Rather than a straightforward account of events, we are treated to a tour of the brutal, terrifying world of Sadie's psyche. The first person narrative style allows us to experience Sadie's eccentric, sarcasm and to feel her pain at a world that has abused and disappointed her. This pattern continues through the actions of her legal counsel, her family, and even the police who question her. The non-linear story telling allows for intriguing flash backs interspersed with tales from Sadie's childhood. Her story culminates in an incredible surprise ending that will stun even seasoned horror and suspense fans.
I would appreciate tips or pointers if you have any. I'm also concerned about how to address my utter lack of publication credits. Is it even worth mentioning publication in a college literary mag if you went to a school no one has heard of? Anyway, I'm not sure how professional I want to be with this. I don't know if I'm talented enough to get away with being flip about publication.
I'm also starting to worry about how "hung up" I'm feeling about getting published. Sometimes I think I could take it or leave it; but more often it seems very very important. Publication won't validate me as a writer, not really. But then...what will? Sales? A fan base? Respect from other writers? Gobs of money? Good reviews? Certainly respect from peers is more important than popularity.
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Don't worry about your lack of credits; just leave that bit blank. Most first-time novelists aren't published.
They'll want a more thorough synopsis, I think; you should spend a couple of paragraphs describing the plot. And they'll want to know what that surprise ending is—don't worry about spoiling the book for them. Don't praise your book; be straightforward in describing it. If they see "incredible surprise ending", they'll probably roll their eyes; they want to know what it is, not what you think of it. :) Lose as many adjectives as you can.
Google "query letter tips" for more help, like this site. Many of them are written by actual editors, and they tell you exactly what they want to see.
Good luck!
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It will also have a full synopsis or outline separate from this letter. Plus I'm sending 3 chapters.