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wednes ([personal profile] wednes) wrote2003-04-26 06:09 pm
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The Mall: poem by Wednes

You are a building
Full of stores
People in you
are crashing bores

silly teens
with great big pants
wierd old men
shout drunken rants

unwatched kids
all throwing toys
half shirt girls
seek vacant boys

Ignorant
and tastless fools
buy Cinnabons
and craftsman tools

They shop for things
I wouldn't touch
You know,
I hate them all So Much!!!

ha ha, I just made that up!!!

[identity profile] lostsatellite.livejournal.com 2003-04-26 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
you are so great!

[identity profile] burnthewitch.livejournal.com 2003-04-26 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Now that,is poetry.
I'm printing that out and putting it on my fridge.

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[identity profile] wednes.livejournal.com 2003-04-26 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes*

[identity profile] princezna.livejournal.com 2003-04-26 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Half-shirt girls OWE!!

I hate the mall too... one day they will all be extinct.

ps- cool poem!

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[identity profile] wednes.livejournal.com 2003-04-26 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I doubt it, idiots love malls, and there will always be idiots.

But its a nice thought.

And thanks!

[identity profile] a-lad-inane.livejournal.com 2003-04-26 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Pretty much my sentiments exactly.

However, until recently, a mall existed here in San Antonio that no one ever went to. It seemed perpetually stuck in the early 80s; whenever I'd enter (I'd go there often), I'd feel like putting on an album from that era, namely Numan's TELEKON, Devo's NEW TRADITIONALISTS or The Motels' ALL FOUR ONE. It would've been a perfect DAWN OF THE DEAD mall. I wish they hadn't closed it. I don't care if it loses money; keep it open for my very peculiar sentimentality.

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[identity profile] wednes.livejournal.com 2003-04-27 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
Why, thanks

[identity profile] jezaimee.livejournal.com 2003-04-27 12:22 pm (UTC)(link)
You said it all! You're awesomely creative.

*jez*

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[identity profile] wednes.livejournal.com 2003-04-27 12:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Gosh, thanks!

Poem

[identity profile] madush69.livejournal.com 2003-04-27 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
That's an awesome poem!!!

Re: Poem

[identity profile] wednes.livejournal.com 2003-04-27 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Why, thanks!

[identity profile] rivetkitten.livejournal.com 2003-04-29 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
very nice. better than mine. and on the spot? any editing?
*in awe*

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[identity profile] wednes.livejournal.com 2003-04-29 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
No editing, I was at my desk at work.

I'm not really supposed to be on LJ during work...oops!

Maybe extreeme annoyance is good for art...