The Mall: poem by Wednes

[wednes]

You are a building
Full of stores
People in you
are crashing bores

silly teens
with great big pants
wierd old men
shout drunken rants

unwatched kids
all throwing toys
half shirt girls
seek vacant boys

Ignorant
and tastless fools
buy Cinnabons
and craftsman tools

They shop for things
I wouldn't touch
You know,
I hate them all So Much!!!

ha ha, I just made that up!!!

Comments

[lostsatellite.livejournal.com]

you are so great!

[burnthewitch.livejournal.com]

Now that,is poetry.
I'm printing that out and putting it on my fridge.

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[wednes.livejournal.com]

*blushes*

[princezna.livejournal.com]

Half-shirt girls OWE!!

I hate the mall too... one day they will all be extinct.

ps- cool poem!

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[wednes.livejournal.com]

I doubt it, idiots love malls, and there will always be idiots.

But its a nice thought.

And thanks!

[a-lad-inane.livejournal.com]

Pretty much my sentiments exactly.

However, until recently, a mall existed here in San Antonio that no one ever went to. It seemed perpetually stuck in the early 80s; whenever I'd enter (I'd go there often), I'd feel like putting on an album from that era, namely Numan's TELEKON, Devo's NEW TRADITIONALISTS or The Motels' ALL FOUR ONE. It would've been a perfect DAWN OF THE DEAD mall. I wish they hadn't closed it. I don't care if it loses money; keep it open for my very peculiar sentimentality.

[bitterfuck.livejournal.com]

nice

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[wednes.livejournal.com]

Why, thanks

[jezaimee.livejournal.com]

You said it all! You're awesomely creative.

*jez*

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[wednes.livejournal.com]

Gosh, thanks!

Poem

[madush69.livejournal.com]

That's an awesome poem!!!

Re: Poem

[wednes.livejournal.com]

Why, thanks!

[rivetkitten.livejournal.com]

very nice. better than mine. and on the spot? any editing?
*in awe*

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[wednes.livejournal.com]

No editing, I was at my desk at work.

I'm not really supposed to be on LJ during work...oops!

Maybe extreeme annoyance is good for art...